As determined as Sir Edmund Hillary, the man trudged up the slim path leading to extreme heights. He was wearing his most comfy jumper to preserve him from the chilling wind. The wind howled across the city, remoulding it from a contemporary city full of modern designs and tall towers, into a frosty city with brisk breezes rustling through everyone's houses. The man was frightened from such heights he was experiencing, sending chills down his bleak spine.
Well there's my sick sentence for today and here is the picture for what you would roughly see if you were in his shoes.
Kia ora Arden
ReplyDeleteYour piskel is super duper!!
Were you here for our Google Meet today?
Morena, Arden
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your learning on your blog. Your sick sentences to healthy are very descriptive. The language that you have used really helps the reader to visualise what is happening. Well done!